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This one here was a bit of a wall for me. I wanted to have one of the characters (the king, it turns out) to say something SO stupid, SO simple, that only a child can say it, y'know since the characters are all reduced to child like IQs.
So I settles with the cooky.
I also had a hell of a time deciding on the insult I would deal after the cookie line. I know I can do better, but I think this does the job.
So I settles with the cooky.
I also had a hell of a time deciding on the insult I would deal after the cookie line. I know I can do better, but I think this does the job.
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Both lines work well, I think; the comic is very cute and with juvenile charm. The only problem is it's difficult to see who is asking for the cookie in the fourth panel because of lack of specifics or any kind of bubble or line to direct the reader's attention to the speaker.